All Comments on 'Chance Encounter'

That older butch lesbian sure made me wet!

Alex sure knows how to make love to a young woman. Your your discription of her womanhood was exquisite.

I am bi 70 years old woman, and very enjoyed this very exciting and fascinatig story

I loved your story. It made me cum so hard... I have always wanted an older butch woman to dominate me. Hopefully one day it will happen.

this one needs a part 2

SEQUEL!

Very hot!

Oh gosh, I would love to feel that inside me. I came reading this all over my fingers and the seat. Phew! Thanks very much.

Amy xxx

I too found this quite hot. It was nice and believable.... With a solidly grounded ending. In fact, I found myself a little like the 20 yr old. turned on by something that generally would be more likely to repulse me (no offense.... Butch lesbians aren't what guys like me fantacize about, haha!)

As a former high school english teacher I have no complaints about the writing from a technical aspect either.

Nice work.

Your story was neither hot nor exciting. I only kept reading this drivel to see if it got any better. And it didn't. I found that the constant reminding that one of your main characters was an overweight butch lesbian a distraction! And I have been reading erotica for many years. And this just didn't do it. Please try again.

Very good story

hot!

Too improbable to be believable, so I couldn't get swept up in it.

I loved the pairing concept here but I would have loved more of a seduction.

It sounds like anyone with a skill for foot rubs can get the hot girl!

Great effort and enjoyable but not quite erotic.

Do you still write?

Any merits this story might have had were spoiled by excessive repetition: "...the 50-year old...", "...the 20-year old...", "...the overweight woman...", "...the butch lesbian...", "...the older woman..." It just went on and on. Give your readers some credit for being able to grasp the point the first time you make it. Once is enough and then use the characters' names or pronouns.

Thanks I'm reading all your stories now and enjoying them all! Hope you write more!

Too many lesbian authors don't appreciate the contrast of an aggressive, already-lesbian, butch-woman pursuing the gorgeous young body of a not-necessarily-lesbian girl! This story clearly understood that dynamic and what makes it so hot! Well done!

Really liked this story, nice to have a realistic but also semi-romantic story of young/old lesbian sex.

Your stories are some of my favorites!

1: Love the butch/femme angle. Keep that going!!

2. Love age differences. Me and my wife (am lesbian) have one.

3. Love the "first time" and "reluctance" feel from the femmes in your stories!

Would like you to change:

1: I'm a femme who loves butches. You really need to have the femme reciprocate oral sex. We're not all afraid of it!!

2: Butches LOVE receiving oral sex from their femmes. No one I know "just rubs pussies together" to get off like you sometimes write.

3: PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE!!!! I LOVE your stories!!

great story. please continue.

Will there be a sequal???

Really good!! I'm 18 and I have a thing for older butches so your stories are always a treat. Since this is an older work and I've read your newer stuff too, you've gotten better. This is good but some of the descriptions seem a bit lacking and there's an overuse of epithets- both things your more recent writing doesn't suffer from.

Please keep writing!!

What a great story. A sad but happy ending. I have already read your newer work and i think you improved alot over the years! Even though this is your first one and already really good! I would love it if you would continue writing stories. You're one of my favorites on this website. Love to see more :)

Oh…sexy relationship for young lady..a mutual,relationship!…new for each of them

I love the butch-femme and older-younger contrasts! Why wouldn’t a young, inexperienced femme fall for a confident, mature, experienced butch? I want more so they can enjoy each other more and maybe fall in love!

baby

What is XY craves but y'all call them creeps

Yet XX and Hooray!