All Comments on 'Chance Encounters'

This story does not require for further chapters. I like it when an author surprises us with something like this. One slight quibble: perhaps if the lead up to the alley scene could have been drawn out to provide some suspense. Actually, come to think of it, perhaps the author could surprise us with a second chapter. On that note, something I do not see often enough for my liking: perhaps the second chapter should be delayed a bit, so that the feeling of time passing in your readers' lives could mirror a (bigger) gap in time of the two characters. After all, the girl would not soon forget that alley scene and that in itself could provide for a build up to any future meeting(s) of the characters.