All Comments on 'Change of Plans Ch. 05'

Five, bitch. ; )

Him need to make up his mind and admit to himself and Billy Joe he really feels.

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I had to read the previous stories first because I don't know how I missed this one. Oh Right. You haven't updated in a year. Lol

Guess better late than never because I AM HOOKED, LINE N SINKER.

EXCEPTIONAL WRITING, ACTUALLY I WAS SO GONE I DIDN'T EVEN CHECK IF THERE WERE ANY GRAMMACTICAL ERRORS. COS AS YOU KNOW EVERYONE ON HERE IS SOME KIND OF ENGLISH PROFESSOR LOL

ANYWAY THIS IS THE 1ST HOOKER STORY THAT'S DONE TASTEFULLY. LOVE ROSENTHAL.

KEEP IT UP

I'm sorry. I don't think I made it clear, this is pre-son. I really did not mean to confuse anyone.

am in deep... to the point I actually hold my breath.. Fantastic!!! more.

no it was quite clear about him being the dad it was just something we didn't even realise we read until we went back and read it again.

please don't let it be another year before you post another chapter.

UPDATE SOON! I really like this story and would like to see where it goes.

Am I weird for wanting to cry for Billy? Either way thank you for the chapter

This dude is an enigma. He has no first name...and what up with him and his head / hair. When he said "what did I tell you about grabbing me, get your fucking hands out of my hair" I was like "no he didn't! If that was me, my pums would have dried up ASAP! LOL Please don't wait another year to update. You gave us 3 pages this time so I am not mad at yah! LOL Excellent writing!

love that she doesn't completely have the "whore" mentality.. great story so far

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AGAIN! I LOVE THIS STORY, SO GOOD, 5 STARS

i saw this movie with julia roberts and richard geer

after the feelings the party brings up about her being a whore she goes back to it for some reason instead of doing something else? there better be a damn good reason for daddy not taking care of her and the kid, and not that it wasnt part of the deal or some stupid shit like that.

This story in no way is similar to "Pretty Woman" which starred Julia Roberts. Oh please let's be real. The way those white women responded to her was authentic. Even if a sistah ain't a whore; she would still be treated like she's trash by bitches like that.

Have seen those superior bull shit attitudes in real life. Pissed me off then and still

does!!! A white ho cleaned up well would never have gotten that shit from her own.

Maybe would have been called out by the man, but men are assholes most of the time.

i hope you write another chapter soon

i hope you write the next chapter soon. i don't think i could wait another year before the next installment.

I love this story. Can't wait for the next update :)

Please finish the story, it is amazing!

Very much would like the story lengthened as I like where you are going with it. Hope to see more chapters.

It was getting good :’( Honestly at first I didn’t really into the whole prostitution and stuff, but now that I’m here it’s really gave the story all these different dynamics that I don’t get nowadays on literotica. Billy’s situation made her emotions so much more raw and touching. I could really sense some of the emptiness she felt, And the story was becoming so beautiful. Really makes me miss the old literotica were people wrote more stuff like this. I hope you see this one day and finish Billy’s story.