All Comments on 'Changed Ch. 01'

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rhevrhevalmost 11 years ago
nice

Short sweet and hot. Keep writing.

DesireeFoxDesireeFoxalmost 11 years ago
This is a promising

start, maybe even have a flashback as to the mode of her changes, wether it be nano-tech, virus, or some form of radiation she was exposed to by some 'evil' Genius

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