All Comments on 'Changed Ch. 14'

the characters need to be more likeable. Karen is flaky, completely uncontrolled and a risk to everyone around her. Theo is ridiculously submissive to her for a beta and a bit two dimensional. I want to like them and like them together but find myself rolling my eyes often. Maybe through mating they'll become more stable?

Keep going though. The storyline is unique and interesting.

I foresee Annie being a problem in the future.

Those challenges were a waste of time. The Alpha should not have gone through with them. Its not right if Annie isn't going to be punished along with Nick. They both had some idiotic plan that could've gotten somebody really hurt or killed.

Sorry but this series could really use an editor. The plot line waffles, the characters fluctuate between flake and solid, and the spelling / grammar errors are distracting. Lastly you add in scenes that contribute nothing to the tale over all.

Not bad but could be so much better.

I love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

And thus another literotica story dies. R.I.P. Changed.

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This story has developed well and I'm anxious to see what the mating ceremony brings about for Karen. How well will she accept the wolf gene? Will it clash with the Spyrim within her? Hurry please! :)

Hit all the emotions. Keep up the good work. Love the story.

It would be wonderful if there were more of this story and more with these characters.

Love the story. Keep checking for updates. If there is anymore please post it

This story is so good! I would love it if you wrote more!!

I'm so sad there isn't more. What about the mating ceremony? You were so close to the end!

Would be nice to get a finish to this story????

Ugh! Please finish this!!!

Another story abandoned 😢