All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 01'

Please continue their story

A bit on the short side, but a great introduction should you wish to continue -- and I really hope you do. Well done -- four stars, and please bring us more!

I truly liked the beginning. Been there,

Erica

Cant wait to hear more

Hot

Is that of a divorce lawyer. It's all over but the shouting. Dump the bitch. And the zipper bit? A cross dresser would know where the zipper belonged. You've got your facts wrong. Actually you've got it all wrong. Even for fiction this was bad

perhaps he just forgot to turn the skirt around in his haste. I liked it from the stand point that his wife didn't start throwing things at him, or call him names. she left work to be with her sick husband. she asked questions that were germane to her marriage. this could be a very nice story, or go right down the toilet, who knows.

"A cross dresser would know where the zipper belonged." Really? Everybody starts somewhere, and I doubt there's a CD anywhere who hasn't made a dressing faux pas that seems obvious in hindsight. The story's interesting, and Sarah's reaction is both appropriate and encouraging.

I read the whole story and enjoyed it. It's well written and grippy. The changes in their relationship are realistic and well explained ... but it's still sexy and exciting. V enjoyable.

This is the first time I am reading your story and I must say that you have set up the stage very well for the next course of events. Love the way you express and more so because this is something I can relate to.

Promising...