by Akshi
Can't wait to see what will come next for Vanessa and Heather. Hope they will find love together?
But it was very good 😀. Thank you. Chapter five....looking forward to it yet again.
Ahhh I just found this story today, so it was nice to get to read all the chapters in one go. I'm loving it!!! Its a nice clean sexy tension filled story so far. I love the slow burn of them getting to know each other and their flirting. I miss such stories on here, so was thrilled to read this one. Really looking forward to reading more.
Frickin' tease! I'm ready to go to page two and...that's it! 😣 Just cruel and unusual punishment. Lol - Thank you for once again providing a wonderful read.
What a wonderful story, well written and I love the characterisation of them! Please let us have more when you can.... Wonderful...... Thank you
Corinne
I'm loving it. It's a relief from the usual wham bam thank you ma'am stories. Please continue. It's a little frustrating to be left expecting more text but getting only about a lit page at a time. But I'll take quality over quantity anytime. So please don't let these complains deter you. I think I'll just have to come back after a month and catch up.
I grew up in Alabama, live in Texas now (from the civil rights days, very familiar with Jim Crow, Bull Conner, George Wallace, and the KKK. Never going back!), but one thing I can tell you about Wisteria is although it is a plant with pretty purple flowers and a wonderful scent, it is a vine, not a tree.
Deserved a 4* becuse of the lack of editing BUT the actual story saved you!
Still needs background detail padding and time for a little more explicit detail; nice touch the need for a pee in the night hours, after too much liquid intake.
Reality is like that. You develop a relationship with occasional meetings and slowly growing feelings. A far better story that wham bam thank you Stan