by grumpyg
This is a splendid scenario. The sex needs to be more detailed, but I like where it's going.
I liked the story. I feel the incest part didn't work into the story that well. i'm not against the incest part but could have been worked in in a different more interesting way. Love the subliminal messaging.
Hope Terry gets both Rachel and Holly into bed with him at the same time for some real family loving group sex.