All Comments on 'Chapter 01: Don't Mess with a Reaper'

I would more than love to see comments from those who read this.

Tell me your thoughts! Tell me what you would like to see in the next chapter! Character ideas, throw them up and you might see them soon.

I was a soldier during desert storm, and you do a very accurate job describing a soldier's life, and mental outlook. The sex was even pretty dead on. If you've never served in the military, you did a hell of a job with research. The 1911 pistol kind of threw me, but overall it was very will written. I eagerly look forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work!

You really have the atmosphere and the sex. Well-told. Looking for more.