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Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Is there any way that you can notify me when you submit them?

@jetosh

Certainly, I'd be happy to! I finished writing Chapter 2 yesterday and submitted it to an editor. If all goes well, it should be up on the site by this weekend.

Looking forward to more of this new world and its inhabitants.

If you like the themes of this story, here are some sources that inspired me:

- For great demonstrations of medieval arms and combat, check out Skallgrim's youtube channel.

https://youtu.be/n5w2Mh6CyXo

- The verses Anahet chanted are excerpts from the death song of Ragnar Lodborok, a legendary Norse leader. http://www.odins-gift.com/pclass/ragnarlodbroksdea thsong.htm

- Landsknecht are based on German and Swiss mercenaries in renaissance Europe, including the German pikemen of the same name.

https://www.britannica.com/topic/Landsknecht e

- Kami are based on Hindu and Shinto beliefs, which inspired great works like the Spirited Away movie and Avatar television series. I'll explore this world's unique interpretation of spirits in later chapters.

I updated this story. I fixed the formatting on the Norse poem, provided more insight to Anahet's emotions, and cleaned up some repetitive text.

Chapter 2 published!

literotica.com/s/anahet-ch-02-choices