All Comments on 'Chapter 01: Poor Little Naive Girl'

Don't give up your day job!

Yeah, in fact, you might want to pick up some extra shifts with the night crew, because you're going nowhere writing.

Bleh. No stars for this. F cup breasts? Do you high school boys know how ridiculous they look? Of course, if all you do is watch porn, then I guess F cups are the norm.

Quit writing. You suck.

I thought it was great! it is obviously ridiculous, yet easy to imagine. Looking forward to seeing more, so dont stop!

I liked it. Haters gonna hate. People taking online sex stories waaaaay too seriously.

why are people reading stories like this if they expect realism? I, for one, prefer the erotic stories i read or the porn I watch to be unrealistic, if I wanted realistic I’d go out and get fucked by some random dude from the club, I like the fakeness because I know it’s something that would never (or at least very rarely) happen to someone, and therefore is a turn on!! keep up the good work :)

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