All Comments on 'Chapter 01: The Right Touch'

Your MMF adventure has nice buildup and sounds very real. IT would be cool if you wrote more like this.

The increasingly sensuous massage strokes described in this story are sure to stimulate the client's libido, as all my massage clients' reactions can attest to. Whether I was massaging a man or a woman, their sighs and moans were clear indications that they wanted me to slide into the more intimate strokes. (I retired years ago, but I've kept my massage tables. Now I give such massages for free to keep from forgetting all the erotic strokes.)

ShakenMartini55 is a good writer who apparently knows how to slowly increase the sexuality in a story. I look forward to reading more of his contributions.

I really liked this story. Watching the first guy get aroused as he saw John come in with the see through g-string. Wow.

it had my cock hard all thru the story

I WOULD LIKE MY FIRST TO BE LIKE THAT

great erotic story. very well written! loved it!

What a sexy story! I'm totally jealous of John as I dream of having a wife who loves to tease and play with others. This story sounds like a fantasy cum true.

Very hot story! I would love to be in that story, sucking a hard cock for the first time and eating a cum filled pussy! My bi-fantasy would finally cum true!

loved your story! I fantasize about having an mmf sexual encounter exactly like this. I would love to suck the husbands hard cock while his wife was playing with her pussy watching as I swallowed my first load of yummy cum!