All Comments on 'Charcoal Ch. 11'

Never did I expect for it to end this way. I figured Scott would meet with Soul's soul in hell and that would be it. They wouldn't be allowed to get back to their bodies. So thank you for bringing them back to be as one again. Having a family member pass on is hard to deal with, but if you have love, it makes it a little bit easier to handle. I would love to see where they end up. I will say this, I truly loved this story and I hope to read many more from you. Please keep writing so many more readers get to enjoy what I did with your writings.

ACLASSYLADY

This was a really good story, feels like there should be more to it. I hope so!

If it is, I'm disappointed. There are a lot of unanswered questions. What was Sylvia's secret/plan and why was Soul so pivotal? What are the other sides? What has been going on with Josie? What about the book prof White found? And what happened to him, are we just supposed to accept that he vanished? I could go on...