by 2marcella2
your a fucktard. This was a cute little story. I just love women authors.
It was a good little story. I hope you continue to write. :) ty
What a hot story. A little bit like a bullet train, the ride was over before I was ready to get off. But I liked it.
surely the author is not a woman.if u seen u will notice that it is only about satisfaction of male desires.even in erotic stories we need enough justification.why on earth marcy feels so horny by seeing her dad's cock?even a slut would not rush to sex like this .marcella plz think and read more before u bother urself to publish it on web
Lucky daddy, hope he flips her over and takes her up the ass whilst spanking her then licks out his creampie and shares it with her, perhaps then she will return the favour and rim her daddy and then have a nice spitty kissing session until mom comes home. Perhaps she will join them.
My enjoyment of the story was spoiled.
Because the author could not be bothered, by checking for spelling mistake, which in turn lead to poor grammar