All Comments on 'Charlie and Mindy Bk. 02 Ch. 03'

by CarlusMagnus

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Captain_FapulusCaptain_Fapulusabout 8 years ago
This is pure gold

The last two lines made me laugh so hard I almost choke to death, and I regret nothing about it! I simply love it how you kept the humorous streak going with a sarcastic remark or a joke here and there thus making the whole story cheerily sweet yet erotic at the same time. Though the steak ow plover will always hold a special place :)

The library scene was a whole other beast in its own right, I'm ready to bet they'll use it many more times while college times roll. The only thing topping is having a hanky panky under the starts in the middle of nowhere.

5* as usual and a great thanks for making my day!

kuli1234kuli1234about 8 years ago

Great story. I know it isn't for every one and some don't like it. But will there be any "watersports" in the series? Been thinking about it since you always mention they have to pee.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 8 years ago
Food for a fan!

Keep feeding me please!

honybipolahonybipolaabout 8 years ago
can't get enough

THANK YOU for these great stories...you sir are one gifted writer of erotica and romance...got me hooked...keep the chapters coming soon to keep us adoring fans happy lol

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 8 years ago
Love the...

...smouldering looks, although I admit I didn't know where the ogling would go from Charles' roommates. I thought he really would stop a rape, but that was a feint. Hot and detailed. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5 really good

As Commentarista said I like how your teasers sometimes are not what we expect them to mean. I enjoy how clever your writing is. Not just on this opus but your other stories too.

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10/25/2019: Submitted Chapter Four of "Looking for Trouble" this morning. 10/23/2019: Submitted Chapter Three of "Looking for Trouble" this afternoon. 10/21/2019: Chapter Two of "Looking for Trouble" submitted this morning. 10/17/2019: This evening, I posted the first cha...