All Comments on 'Charlotte in the Country'

A lovely fantasy. You build up the tension nicely and recreate a sexy memory.

Excellent like all your stories.

Steve

Loved it, but spellcheck and some proofreading would have helped a lot

Thanks for your comments guys! A girl likes to know someone is paying attention!

Kisses,

Charlotte

Outstanding effort for a short piece! Is that Goochland, Virginia?

Yes, it is Goochland, Virginia. I live in Richmond.

Charlotte

Thanks, I thought so. I'm up in Fairfax County just outside of DC. Cheers & keep writing - very enjoyable stuff!

This was beautiful and Hot. I love the emotions mixed with the erotica.