All Comments on 'Charlotte's Day Pt. 02'

A very good sex filled story of girl/girl love well worth four stars, however that's all it was not really a story at all, you have a very good idea and should build on it.

Like 80% of men I love stories about women having sex with eachother and don't even think of them as gay like I do of males having sex with each other a real turn off.

This is a good start but I think it would have been better if first you had combined both parts and second you had spent more time telling about the characters involved. Look forward to reading more of your work