All Comments on 'Chase Cooder - Bush Pilot! Ch. 02'

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LEATBTLEATBTalmost 17 years ago
I'm loving this story

Can't wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sorry, not buying it

Not buying it ... the grammar was bad. was that supposed to be funny? The brainiac stuff with all the majors and minors ... and the Rangers to Delta force ... Ranger is a school ... and all the women from all around the world? That's too difficult to swallow without an explanation.

Sorry.

kimbaleekimbaleeabout 16 years ago
nice!

second chapter is a glimspe into what makes him the man he is, and also good to meet Ruane. great job expanding the story and hook at the end. Now, on to the next one...

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Many moons ago a story took shape and begged to be born. However, the characters took control and the story made a completely unexpected and surprising crossdressing turn...and I went with it. Readers enjoyed it so I did some lather, rinse repeat on the theme and they seemed t...