by jomar
Not buying it ... the grammar was bad. was that supposed to be funny? The brainiac stuff with all the majors and minors ... and the Rangers to Delta force ... Ranger is a school ... and all the women from all around the world? That's too difficult to swallow without an explanation.
Sorry.
second chapter is a glimspe into what makes him the man he is, and also good to meet Ruane. great job expanding the story and hook at the end. Now, on to the next one...