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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
there's only about a quarter of the story here

The writing is way, way too fast. In order for sex to be hot, there has to be an emotional connection. And characters need to be introduced gradually, not just pop up near the end. And the dialog is off. Are you threatening me? Pretty dumb question for a university professor to ask.

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