All Comments on 'Chase's Motherly Love'

That was awesome I nearly died that ending though

You had a great story going and then the wheels came off. They were to have an entire day alone to play out their fantasy. Then Jacob walks in and the story ends. This story could have been so good but it imploded on it's self.

I appreciate the feedback.. I thought the ending gave it a good twist. The idea of having her son walk in on her while she is being spanked is a sexy idea in my opinion. I can see the fact that some may feel it ends the story abruptly. I'll take that info with me as I go. More stories to come. Hope you enjoy them!