All Comments on 'Chasing Addison Ch. 01'

...curious to see where this is going :)

This story sounds interesting! Keep it up!

Thanks to everyone who liked it!

Unfortunately, I'm not sure I did. Reading it now on the site, I'm thinking that I would DEFINITELY like to rework this. Everything happened much too quickly; emotions and intentions were not clearly enough expressed. These characters are so awesome in my head, (of course, I may be a little biased because after all, Addison IS based off of me....) and I think that they are not accurately represented in my writing.

So, just so you know, I'll will probably be posting a revised chapter 1 along with chapter 2 in the near future.

ivy_Girl :)

Hurry with the next chapter!