by geesteve11
After reading this chapter i now understand what i was confused about in my previous comment. He is the one with the big cock not her. This part is better than the previous one. Just like you asked in your previous chapter there are some faults in the use of words and misspellings . but 5 wrong in 3 pages is nothing. Continue like this and your storie will become one of the best (well not as good as THE FATE OF TERRA that one is fantastic).