All Comments on 'Chasing Amy'

back in there very hot from a boring mall sesonal duty

What involved or married guy (or gal) hasn't experienced some serious eye contact or flirtation while shopping during the holidays? On occasion some of the lucky ones even get to take this to a higher level or even consummate that flirtatious behavior. This was a fun and very sexy read. Thanks for sharing this post. :)

Seriously...I'm horny just reading this. Great story

Two keys to why this is a 5. The premise subtley makes believable an ublievable event. Maybe this could have really happened to a guy? Yes just once, but wow. Second, the tension, She wants it, she fights herself and him. He knows its crazy, but he can't stop himself. The sex is desperate and hurried but ever so good.

I agree with seacoast! Great story and one of my favorites! I can't wait to go to the mall next time.

Not close to a believable situation. No sexual tension or credible build up.

Five stars.

for all the great feedback, I appreciate and consider all of it, even the negative ones. And thanks to the inspiration for this story. . .you are fucking hot and we should go shopping soon.

Enjoyed the writing. You did a good job of simply getting to the point yet not speeding things along so fast that there's no substance. Not too far-fetched so I was able to keep reading without stopping to mentally wonder why you included something so questionable.

Something very similar happen with me, and her name was Amy (in my dreams). Thanks for writing. tom anon

You have to write a follow up.

I really loved this story! Hot, needy fucking at its finest. Write more and more often please :)

ah yes - what an adventure and christmas is not far away - mmm - black friday - and then Santa and the Elves - lol - Talk about hot!

Just popped in for a quick story before bed. I don't see why it needs to be believable. Where's the fun in that? This was definitely a fun little read. Her resistance gave it just enough tension and I enjoyed the desperation of their tryst.

It's been awhile since my fingers wandered into my panties reading a story.... Definitely a 5 orgasm story and need to read your other stuff!

Don't like it when the guy disses the girl-

I. loved. this.

I too ; would like to go shopping in a mall you are at. I’ll ditch the panties ;0

I LOVED this story!! One reason I did was how well-written and RAW it was! Most will see it as unbelievable. Not me. The other reason was that this almost exact thing happened to be at a State Fair many years ago but in a van, not an SUV.

EXCELLENT!