All Comments on 'Chasing Summer Ch. 01'

What a stupid story. Um, loving WIVES?

What a treat! I do hope you'll write more.

I like the writing and I hope you continue it. Don't let these closet cucks bring you down with their post-masturbatory shame.

did your mother have any kids that lived? just wanted to know, I mean after all your a brain dead moron. Lit doesn't have less than one, but they should, they should!

Love this little story. Just the kind of conversation I would have with my wife or girlfriend and the reaction would be the same.

Not a fan of cuck tales; however since this is your first attempt here on LW, just a small tip to help improve your writing. Just STICK to one person in each paragraph i.e

first or third are the usual but don't mix them up. 1 *

Not a bad start, but it has some issues that shoudn't be forgotten: Even living together they are just boyfriend/girlfriend, no strings attached...They had already various separations, and the questions are: 1st - When she needed to fuck other guys, did she used an argument to have a short separation? If so her love for him has many flaws...2nd - now that she found out he is a cuckold, how her love and respect for him will suffer? If that love and respect wasn't very strong, now will be even less...And being so this relationshil will never get to engagement much less to marriage...2* for now

Most readers here are cucks or have been cucked thats why we come here every day hoping to read another cuck story.Why all the hate after reading the cuck stories is beyond me.If you are reading this section you are a cuckold.

he wants to learn more and she living in her past... wow if that is not in your grey matter.

She hears every line in the book when unattached and is exercising her right as a single girl to play the field. But he shouldn't take eye off the ball, just concentrate on obtaining engineering degree from Berkeley. If she won't give him family discount on next order of bacon wrapped chicken wings with Bleu cheese on side, somebody else will.

Lovely story. Please ignore hate mail and continue to write. The psychological unfolding in the story is hot!!!

1*

Your story is an interesting start, but you really need to work on perspective. It's very confusing when it suddenly switches from first person, which most of it is in, to third.

Example:

3rd person-

He kissed her longingly as she climbed off of him, making her way to his side where her left hand drifted towards his member.

1st person & 3rd?-

I put my on her face, and gently brought it back up so that they made eye contact. "Have you made out with other guys?"

"I" in this sentence is 1st but "they" is third... it should have been "we made eye contact."

Thank you for writing.

Best~

I thought it was a great story. Explore the mind games some more before anything actually happens. Can't wait for chapter 2!

Believable dialog and good tension. Ignore the comments and forge ahead with what you want to say.

We were on again, off again through school, marrying not long after she graduated. That's when I found out she wasn't a virgin, but I still was. She was very, VERY experienced and we've used it for our naughty bedroom sex every since.

It turns out the guy who took her cherry was my best friend. I knew they were going out, just not that he was going IN!. That fueled a lot of nasty sex, I knew that fucker was hung, his nickname since 6th grade was mule. She said when he popped her cherry, it was like a baseball bat had been stuck in there. It didn't last long, she said, about 10 strokes. Then a month of healing and then a second time which took more healing. After that, he fucked her almost everyday, multiple times each day during the summer months.

He wasn't the only one, each time her and I got together and then split up, she fucked a different guy out of spite. I was the only one she didn't let between her legs, because as she said, I was the only one that was husband material and didn't want to seem like a slut.

Now after all these years, I've learned of at least 4 different guy that tasted her charms, dipped their wicks, in my future wife's juices!

Before you start telling writers that they're posting incorrectly perhaps you should check it yourself.

Mods in the forum have said girlfriends, fiances and wives are all good in LW.

Your bad

Author: 3*

wonder if you could have got the words baby or babe in this story more?

You are the most pathetic poster that In have ever read on this site. Your married to a slut , and proud of it. She fucked every one of your so called friends, and you get nothing. She said she didn't fuck you because you were the only one that was marriage material, no she didn't fuck you because she knew your a fucking stupid idiot. She fucks your friends you stay at home and jack off, pathetic. You probably ware panties not boxers, whose kids did you raise, if you had any, yours or your friends, the on with the big cock. I'M surprised you had the nerve to post that peace of info about your disgusting existence and marriage

Im lucky I didnt come in my pants reading the last sentence..Nice job!

Not sure why these types of stories always bring out the trolls who are clearly incapable of accepting other people's passions/fetishes, but I liked it! Keep up the writing!

Amazing story - I love how natural and realistic their discovery is. keep going!

I can see where this could be a dangerous subject for a young couple. I suspect the boyfriend is going to end up a cuck wimp, but it is worth reading more.

There is definitely just one anony-hater fuck! You must be a typical lib in that you don't want anyone to have a chance to read something YOU don't care for. If you don't like it, no one else should.

Like a television, learn to make a choice for yourself and turn the channel and not worry about what others enjoy.

What a dick-loser!

JUST ANOTHER DEAD END SHIT TALE. UNREALISTIC, BULLSHIT.

Thanks everyone, I appreciate it. Even the haters.

Good start to this story and I find it interesting. The only problem was you were switching between first and third person several times in this story which was confusing.

Online idiotic cuck crap!

Off the hook hot and Out-motherfucking-standing. Well done

Tags should appear at the beginning of each story.

Or why I wish the writer would have the courtesy to give us a heads up regarding a basic theme.

Sorry but this genre is not erotic for me, quite the opposite.

fag cuck shit.

You all know exactly what sort of stories are posted in this category. yet here you are. jerking off.

If you know...even if you suspect that your girlfriend...or worse, your wife...saw other men while the two of you were broke up, never, Never, NEVER, go back with her. There is no longer anything there for you. Nothing will ever be exclusively yours anymore. A guy I know tried to buck the odds and took his wife back and he wound up with Aides, passed along thru his wife from one of her lovers during their break. He died about 9 months later.

I was going to finish this one, but the last line ended it for me.

Blonde hair, extremely hot, a few years younger, met at a party - wow - it sounds like you described me and my girlfriend a few years back. Now as an adult, I know she was with other guys...she didn't hide that from me..it is a long story. Anyway, if I had the courage to ask about what she did with him, I know I would have exploded in her hand too. Great writing..nice build up.

Stories about willing wimpy cuckolds are a turn off for me, with no entertainment value whatsoever. Can you write any stories where the boyfriend/fiancé/husband isn't a worthless mat to be walked on, laughed at, mocked and ridiculed?

This guy is.in high school and already ruined. What a totally messed up guy.

Never ask a question you don't know the answer to. Does he really want to open that can of worms? Maybe his wife really isn't with him. This looks like a train wreck waiting to happen.

1 star

Why in hell did the story switch from first person to third person for a while?

I exploded too!

Slow down to 35 then Kick her to the Curb .

They were typical high school sweethearts but he was in grade 12 while she was I. Grade 10 and he met her at a party throne by his friend and he didn’t know anyone there even though they all went to the same school?

She wouldn’t have seen him for 2 years while he was in Berkeley but somehow goes to university and is a Hooters waitress? Why not skip the middle man and make her a stripper?

This story has done good moments but overall, it felt thrown together.

It’s my understanding that they aren’t married. Can a man dating a woman technically be a cuckold?

So this dude didnt realize he had deep seated homosexual tendencies until now? Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.

Good story so far but slightly annoying how it switched from 1st to 3rd person at times.