All Comments on 'Chastity of a Cheating Man'

by crazythoughts

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jmkuehnjmkuehnover 9 years ago
interesting start.

interesting opening and I like the premise of your story. Next chapter I would suggest you deal with how you're going to get him in this thing in the first place, but very promising opening.

RobsoundRobsoundover 9 years ago
Excellent?

I like your thinking, please write more.

NessaNicoleNessaNicoleover 9 years ago
hmmmm, Anne.

This is an interesting start to a story. Will Anne and Sandra be included in all of these future stories? Hmm. I am very interested to see where this may go. Keep writing sweetie and we shall see what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
common!

I like charity stories but im sorry this is just not anywhere near believable. Even a guy who has charity desires is not going to agree to go from no chastity to I'm going to be a whore and your locked up for the next 20 years. At least give the ladies some finesse to take him down that rabbit hole.

GoodhueGoodhuealmost 9 years ago
Why Machine Guns Were Invented!

As soon as he's not amoungst the cunts,he picks up some semi-automatics and blows their asses into oblivion. (Don't need the key to get the cock cage off.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

You are a pathic fat fuck of female garbage.

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