All Comments on 'Cheat Days Ch. 04'

Ch #5 cant cum soon enough. Great story.

Oh hell yeah! Each one is better than the last. Eve should have Mal eating other pussies before long. And Eve should eventually introduce her to other pets. And let's not forget to deal with Mallory's mommy issues. I'm sure her mommy would expect her obedience. This is awesome. Can't wait for more.

More please. Amazing story.

Oh god that was so erotic.

Please continue. Loving it so far.

Your story is (bluntly) so fuckin' hot! It's a 5 star episode as usual. In fact, it's so hot that I gave you the 5-star rating despite the fact that I found your overuse (in my opinion) of commas distracting! So, the hell with the commas! I can't wait for the next chapter!

What a great story! You've got me waiting on the edge of my seat for the next instalment.

Please hurry!!

Thank you for continuing your story. You're telling it so well! I'll be on the lookout for the next installment with damp panties...

You made mention of Eve wanting to see Mal suck a cock. Can't wait to read what happens when the boys return from their golf trip. Will things return to "normal" and what else does Eve have up her sleeve for our gal mal... can't wait..

lesbians not real people

I really liked the bathroom scene with the cute little waitress. I would like to see a return trip to the restaurant for some unfinished business with the waitress. Or maybe Eve had set up some kind of arrangement for another time. Maybe the waitress was already a pet of Eve's. Eve seems to be a predator so it also seems that she would have others in the wings that would be brought into play at some point. What will Mal do at that time? Maybe other wives from the neighborhood young hotties from the neighborhood that's ready for plucking.

There's hot, there's hotter, and then there's incendiary. One of the very best stories ever to grace the lesbian section at Lit. Thank you for this.

Pleeeease keep writing these they are absolutely amazing. Love this series.

Hope for lots more!

Without a doubt one of if not the hottest lesbian story I have ever read here on Lit.

So damn hot and romantic.

Great fun!

Doc

4th story 4th 5-star rating... great character development... great ladies, wonderful sex... marvelous implied master/sub relationship... has all the potential for one of the great Literotica series!

Remember Star Trek Voyager? The 7 of 9 Borg character played by Jeri Ryan? Well, I read this again. And came. Again. Then I had my husband read it. His 7" was weeping with joy as I used my mouth to joyfully lubricate his smiling circumcised head. Then he fucked me. No kidding, felt like 9'. Yes. For sure. His 7 felt like 9. We both came. Like an explosion of Star Fleet and Borg coming together in a good way for mankind. He and I. Our own Federation. What a great way to celebrate our 29th Anniversary.

I found it by accident and have never felt so excited. this is so awesome to read, I am loving it, I didn't need this story, but yes is caught me by storm and I love it all, great author. and again a five star read.

My comment two below. We went at it again. Still and yet again another huge explosion. Now we are cemented together. Literally. Makes me want to be dominated by another "take-control" kind of horny woman. Alone. He watching on closed circuit tv. I would like to experience lesbian sex exactly as you have expressed here.

Glad my wife hasn't met the two of you. She might not come home for days. She's like learning to ride a bike. She gets off and she'll crawl back on and rides it some more . I've watched her rub her pussy against another pussy for at least an hour and a half. Getting off four to five times. She loves women more than me.

what a total load of rubbish seems the twins have disapeared

So good. I love how you weave this and Side Dish together. very impressive, and very provocative

oh no, theres a ch 5 and maybe more,,getting boring, it could have ended in the lavatory at the restaurant. wish the authors would let the readers know how many chapters and/or pages.