All Comments on 'Cheaters Ch. 01'

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Modern_CitizenModern_Citizenalmost 14 years ago
Proofing.

"Fuck. I fucking new it." Terry growled.

Should be "I fucking knew it."

Story has potential.

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
nice

great start, can't wait for chapter two.

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
nice

great start, can't wait for chapter two.

ryu77ryu77about 19 years ago
Interesting.....

Wanna know how this will unfold.

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