All Comments on 'Cheating Pt. 04'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 6 years ago
Good story

I liked how he was uncertain and not an automatic sex god. The sex was hot and his premature ejaculation was both humerous and realistic. I hope you write more and show how she teaches him to be a more confident lover.

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 6 years ago
A delightfully erotic tryst described in exquisite detail... Five Stars

You illustrate perfectly the dynamic of the tables being turned... of an experienced woman using the man as desirable sexual object. You show that men can play the role of attractive and yet inexperienced lover like Carl who need guidance and nurturing from a beautiful woman who is no stranger to the act of sex, a woman who see's what she wants and takes it. Well done, very well done indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Want more at the end

Was quite a build up for just once in bed, then the next series your divorced? Seems allot of a story out there floating

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I have always loved writing and have used it both for pleasure and in my work. Recently my attention has turned more and more towards writing erotica. That was prompted by reading some stuff on Lit, so it seemed logical to publish on here. My divorce and being alone may hav...

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