All Comments on 'Check Mates: Story 03'

I have checked - sorry, I couldn't see any other way of putting that - your profile and I am unable to find Stories 1 and 2. Is this an oversight or something like Asimov's 'The Gods Themselves', which starts, if I remember correctly, at Chapter Six?

Either way, very well done for writing this arousing and literate piece; you may have five stars and my sincere thanks.

really punchy capturing start, grabs you and makes you continue reading. even if in places almost uncomfortable to read (which is another compliment instant sympathy for characters) the sexual tension leaps off the page. as always very descriptive and love that there is a story between those passionate moments as it makes for easier reading and leaves you waiting for another glimpse.