All Comments on 'Check-Out Line'

I really liked tis one as it didn't fiddle around too much and went straight to the point, yet along the way delivered a glimpse of romance, a man being the real gentleman and offered a lady who took a lead for a change.

Hope to see more works of such quality from you in the future.

5*

Absolutely loved the beginning. Actual people doing actual things. Loved the attraction between them both and the hot sex. Kind of seems like in the end you hurried it and kind of went from a romantic girlfriend to a nymph. Slow it down and much more of the romance please.

Havent you been here long enough to know youre supposed to have a 14" cock? I really liked it. I was thinking before page 2 dont marry her the sex will be over. Then I turned to page 2. Good job though.

My wife loved it when I read it to her as foreplay. Great story, gave you 5 stars.

love to see more like this. but maybe just a little longer. well done.