All Comments on 'Checkmate'

Slightly different scene. Well written and enjoyable

Enjoyed it thouroughly!

Nice setting. Good flow and story line. I have a weakness for stories about guys being seduced into submission.

Great read- would love to see more of this story or others like it!

Slightly unrealistic scene, but well written and enjoyable

I liked the story and it got the wife really horny. Well done...

Great story, fun, sexy and an easy read. Have you ever considered as some commenters have suggested, sequels. I see you have the material in your stories to them and do them good. T

Another very good short story that takes place within about 15 hours. Well written and erotic with a good ending. Another story that begs for a part 2. A must read!