All Comments on 'Checkout Lane Hookup Ch. 05'

I just hope it aint over.I think she means more to him than a weekend. Chapter 3 plz.

Yes please do not let this tale die just yet. The feelings and emotions expressed between these two would seem to run deeper than just these few days!!

I liked it very much. And no I didn't think you over-used "cunt." I love the word. It carries sexuality with it as does "fuck" and "cock."

You might have offered a lot more description of what she thought and more importantly, when he began to erupt, about the taste and texture of his cum; how even after she swallowed, some lingered in her mouth. How even when she kissed him goodbye, she could still taste it, and so could he; almost like a creampie. He might have tasted it then and gone back for a second deep tongue kiss. She would have noticed and liked that.