All Comments on 'Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther Ch. 04'

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JC_The_ContinuerJC_The_Continueralmost 7 years ago
cheesy

I'm going to give up at this point.

cheesy, poor imagination of battle and an overdone sex shower scene between two apparent cheerleader slut lesbian/bisexual

shame, it had potential

JC

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not worth my time

The first story was interesting, the dialogue was strange and the sex was brief but the first story in a series usually is. Second story was disappointing because it didn't improve and had even more brief sex. Third story was a mess with a bit better sex portion. This was just disappointing. I like the idea behind everything but the story telling isn't good and the sex seems like you found another story went to its sparknotes page and copied and pasted changing the names with Ctl-F.

Please find a editor.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fun story! I just read another hentai cosplay story here and liked both of these very much.

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