All Comments on 'Cheerleader Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice

that was nice but short to you need to get other Cheerleaders in to it to

Teacher44Teacher44over 7 years ago
Short and... well, short.

Even for a short story this was awfully short. If I can read it in less than 2 minutes, it's not long enough. Also, have you ever seen college cheerleaders? They rarely (if ever) have DD boobs, as it interferes with their cheer routines.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very mediocre

Calling it mediocre is being nice. It reads like some high schooler read a bunch of romance novels and then decided to write a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Way to short

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