All Comments on 'Chelsea Wang'

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cowbullscowbullsabout 8 years ago
interesting

I liked the originality but the sex was too quick. I want to read details of the two guys taking her. I also think they would have switched and had a second helping.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very Choppy

It has the seeds of a good story but the writing seems to be just connected thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Get an editor

And try again. Or do a much better job of proof reading.

ShortymulShortymulabout 4 years ago

Seemed really good in the beginning and then rushed in the end

Kittykait66Kittykait66over 1 year ago

That was so hot 😍 lol if I was brave I’d try been homeless

Kittykait66Kittykait66over 1 year ago

I should try been homeless for three weeks

SteelPaperTSteelPaperTover 1 year ago

Slap in the face of the real homeless

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