All Comments on 'Chelsea's 18th Birthday Ch. 01.5'

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MiliktheRedMiliktheRedalmost 15 years ago
First time sensuallity

This was even better than the origanal. I loved hearing her thoughts as she lost her virginity! Fantastic work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great!

It wasnt heaps different to the original but it was great to hear the story again. Please keep continuing with the story as Chelsea grows more confident!!

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