All Comments on 'Cherry, Cherry Pt. 01'

The word "don" means to put on, not take off.

keep going. i loved watching gilligan's island

I liked the start. Hopefully chapter 2 will be longer and will exlpain what 'Cherry, Cherry" has to do with the story.

great start. love the concept and the family. needs more than another 1 page chapter - this could be many chapters. and hopefulll each one will be a little longer - i really enjoyed reading it.

donned means put on doffed means take off

Great start to what could be a few chapters long. Agree with other comments that the story gets a little longer each chapter.

How many guys wish for that to happen.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

great story, i realy hope you are working on next parts.....

"Look for Part 2"

When?

Basically just your standard 'family stranded on desert island' story. Trite . . . .