All Comments on 'Cheryl'

I really like this story. I liked how you reflected on his early sex life, and how you had Cheryl sucker him in. I have to know how this meeting will go and how HER life has been.

Please continue this.

Nice idea, but rambles a bit too much. Try fewer, or shorter, flashbacks. And having spent so long on the previous tryst, the next can't just be a rehash.

I hope that you will let us know what happens to the two of them.

Thanks

way to many flash backs and they were to long and boring it gets real confusing and the reader loses interest fast