All Comments on 'Cheryl Gets a Younger Body'

A good premise and the buildup was done well. But then you just ended it. Rather abruptly. And without showing any emotion or remorse. It didn't even sound he needed to think it over.

Also, the junkie aspect doesn't really come out. Especially not since you actually show her scared and crying as she realises the effect its having on her.

Needed a little more work to turn it from a decent story to a really good story.

- JT