by Keyboardman
You wrote an extraordinary romantic story. Absolutely beautiful! Thanks for sharing with us.
Hi, I would not normally read Gay Male stories. However, just curious I took a chance. And I am glad I did. This is lovely and well written. It is also sweet and gentle. You paint beautiful pictures for your readers. So, well done to you and please keep it up. It would be interesting to read Joe's first time doing it to Kent.
The story is romantic, not just the usual MM cock frenzy. These guys have a future together, so write more.
This story was simply great: it took you in from the onset and held you. The descriptions reminded me of Tolkien - the natural correlation between circumstance and place. The passion - well illustrated - in that tenderness aside, it even provided the reader with a sense of closure. A very nice progression. (Pun intended. ^^) Respectfully Cass
Can't say how much I really enjoyed reading this well-crafted story. Bravo!
This wonderful romance begins in shared experiences of pain and devotion and builds smoothly into HOT SEX at the climax. The heroic, passionate characters are well revealed to us as well as to each other. It's sort of a modern retelling of Damon & Pythias. I love it! THANK YOU!
This story was very romantic, and the touches of sadness made it even better. Very touchy-feely, a comfort story. Loved it!
I haven't read this in a while, tho I have read it many times. Wish you would write more. Thank you.
SO good...a must read for any romantic or anyone who has suffered the loss of a loved one~ THANK YOU~
So worth the read! Characters were real and the story line reflected all the frustration and realization of what was, what had been there all along and what will be. Thank you!
Just beautiful. The real meaning of erotica to me is what you did in this story. Thanks.