All Comments on 'Chicken Race'

Not great but not as bad as his usual stories. The KEY is that the wife KNOWING her husband is suspicious STILL decided to met & fuck Felix.

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Not surprisingly that KEY issue is never mentioned even one time in the story by either the Husband point of view in the stry nor does anyone else ever bring up this singular point.

...not the title. I know the title makes sense, but I was not fond of it. I did like the story and it was good. Thank you for your words.

This style is a bit like reading a news report. A bare bones statement of information with absolutely no emotions, lacking imagination.

The author has an ability with word formation, but would do better writing manuals on lawn care or home improvement.

Nice cars though, right down to the colors.

I think many of the harsh criticism's don't take into

account that English is not your native language.

It was a good story and the only REAL criticism I have

is how the new lovers fall into bed and profess their

love so quickly. Again, thanks for continuing to submit and entertain.

How does one go about getting three (let alone 1) 1.5 liter bottles of pig piss? I can't imagine the market for that commodity would be readily available in Scandanavia. Do you force the poor little piggy to chug beer? Who then has to direct the flow into the proper recepticle? The image boggles.

I love your stories Winterfrog and was glad to see that you had written a new one. I would like to see more punishment for the wife though. She didnt seem to have much remorse of the fact she was opening her legs for someone other than her husband. Both Husband and Wife seem to have gotten over each other rather quickly. Thanks for making the husband a stand-up guy and not a wimp. As always looking forward to your next story. Glenn in NC

bottles of pig piss. Perhaps the piss fairy brought them dumb ass. From the pigs ass you idiot how do you think. Great story WINTERFROG. I see your name and know that some ass hole is going to get it and that some cheating slut is going to get caught. So good to read stories from other than British wimp writers MARRIEDWITHBALLS@YAHOO.COM

The comment about pigs piss really did make me laugh,ask any pig farmer he will tell you how to fill 3 x 1.5 litre bottles with pigs piss.On a lighter note,I would imagine it tastes better than some of the strange brews I have drunk in my time

Both the story and the comments,Married with balls,if you are American and you drink American beer then you know what pigs piss tastes like,bloody awfull.

You give me a smile as I read your stories. You have a way of putting circumstances and remedies in a remarkable way. This makes your plots as different as to being refreshing. I also love your Scandinavian style of writing as it is so much more open to me.<P>Thank your for the fun entertainment, and please keep writing<P>PT

I am very glad I have come across your stories author they are fine,you have MARRIEDWITHBALLS to thank.His macho comments are hilarious.The term British means all and sundry,including COULORED PEOPLE.I am english white anglo saxon,you would be surprised what we are capable off

One of your best stories. I particularly enjoyed the fun and games the husband played with the cheating wife and her asshole boyfriend. The cheaters got everything they deserved.

Boyd

I love your stories! Seems like he would have started his investigation by checking out the guy from the chicken race first. Thanks for writing!

I "loved" the story, but now you have me wondering what Norwegian word for love would be something a little bit weaker than love in English! That was awfully quick to permit that sort of decision. Certainly was surprising that she did not shut down the operation for a couple of months.

If it was just for excitement dropping it would have been easy. The fact that she tried to meet up with Felix again

indicates that she was seeing more in the relationship.

Happy New Year Winterfrog!

I tried to like it, after all, it's about a man who refuses to accept a cheating spouse. But with an attitude like his, it's no wonder she cheated on him, he's a blithering idiot! From the outset, he shows himself to be a jerk by running people off the road. Then the "insult"? from the opposite driver is ludicrus. Seriously, learn to fucking write. No one insults somone else like that, they just give them the finger and swear at them from the comfort and safety of their car. I quit reading halfway through the first chapter it was so bad.

Always look foward to your stories,Thanks for another great one!

been cut off by a driver in traffic just after he cheated with some mans wife and the guy found out and called the cheaters wife before he got home. It was a great comical story of what should happen to cheaters, male or female. The wife was an idiot, most cheaters are, and was talking in the story to a friend about whether her husband was still curious about her possible cheating. The asshole dentist got his, althought I might have enjoyed more torture of him first. The wife got off rather lightly all told. She assumed the husband would believe anything she said and wandered off to be inseminated again. Judging by her behavior personally I would have checked the DNA of our kids, cheaters like this are sure no one else knows and are simply moving from one affair to the next over time. Someone questioned the use of I love you so early in a relationship, hell, almost every girl I balled told me sometime during or after the event I love you. Loosely translated it means I love the way you fucked me and really has little to do with love the emotion or a serious relationship. I would recommend he move in with instead of marry the dentist wife. She she wasnt employed maybe dentist is having to support her and we would hate to cause the payments to stop. I seriously enjoy your stories, I dont always agree with them, but they are I will assume real for your environment there and smack of what people might do.

Thanks for sharing Winterfrog.

You - Author - are appreciated because you deliver consistently that which satisfies the need for fairness without much equivocation.<P>

Hemingway - not quite but growing with each effort. I would love to watch your editor as he tries to preserve as much local flavor and sayings as possible. Each of you deserve a large Platinum Star above.<P>

You understand the audience and deliver with humor that which satisfies the real human readership need for justice.<P>

With Very High Regard

I HAVE ENJOYED ALL OF YOUR POSTINGS. THANKS AGAIN FOR THE ENTERTAINING READ. JRJ

Thank-You for a great read, great revenge & no wimps ending.

The only stories of yours I've not enjoyed are those where you deviated from this theme of husband cheated on in his nordic town, luv it!

Also liked the comical plotlines for payback to the cheaters, not severe enough in my book for his whore-exwife! Where was the good old-fashioned vengeance, or playing out of severe consequences? Not criticism, I just think that you could easily weave these into the way you write, and would be a great read in your style of story telling.

Thanks again, we await more!!

just another grim, misogynistic morality play devoid of originality or humor, especially as far as the narrator is concerned. Lord, if I were married to a creep whose life's entertainment was beating other drivers to parking spots I'd cheat on him too. Best, Ken

Uninspired storytelling that failed to hold my interest.

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but pretty damn good in any case. I too wondered why he didn't check up on the guy in the chicken race but mine not to reason why.

Hooking up with techsan has made your stories more readable but they were always a great read.

Regards, Jack

I enjoyed the story, as I do most of Winterfrog's. But Harry is right: how likely is it that Sarah, once she knows her husband is suspicious, would persist in her affair with Felix? At the very least she would surely cool it for a while, unless she WANTS to get caught, of which there's no sign in the story. This element really weakens the story for me.

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I enjoyed the story. This is a huge improvement over the english used in earlier stories which gave it a much improved "flow". Thanks for writing

Well written and nice story. The revenge was classic. Thanks for sharing.

Some amusing interludes.

I would have preferred punishment, revenge, and then reconciliation.

If you cannot use language do not impose such mindless shit to readers!!

There was no need to rush into divorce as Robin could always walk out later. Instead he should have offered Sarah reconciliation in return for severe punishment and humiliation, with revenge sex perhaps with Mrs Felixsen thrown in. This should continue for as long as the affair. I really think that authors should set a better example when writing about children, which might just encourage a few people to think long and hard before subjecting their innocent children to the psychological damage of a family breakdown.

of this guy ever having a lasting relationship with anyone unless it be with the man sharing his prison cell after he kills a small child while dring like a lunatic to grab a parking space.

And what a fool to believe an insult shouted by some one offended by his bad driving. To think that without any other indications is evidence of a personality that would be hard to live with.

His wife would be pleased to be rid of him once she gets over the shock.

Have you got relatives in my country? Shweinhund??!

Seniors are not sexy.

have a cop-hating pedophile convention to get to?

have a cop-hating pedophile convention to get to?

good wriitng but the man is hardly man enough. not enough revenge. He lets her escape easily. Way to easily for my liking.

and the sky is falling. TK U MLJ LV NV

Honestly there is no excuse a cheater can come up with that justifies cheating or for their spouse to stay with them. The woman cheated and i think he was to nice personally she was a slut plain and simple the kids shouldnt have tried to get them back together that just shoes poor parenting when kids think cheating is ok. They will see it as acceptable when they get older if you allow it. I respect the guy for dropping her with no chance of her coming back.

She didnt deserve 50/50 though that is the stupidest set of laws in the world the cheater should get 0.

Learn of the cheater - fix their wagons - drop; them off move on

Occasionally find an excuse or reason to work through the issues - as long as respect might be maintained - and work on it -

I like the way this writer thinks in most cases and enjoy the stories in all so far -

WF you have one of the best writing styles on the site. at first i was a little taken aback with it but it is unique and should never change.

Always happy to see the cheater dumped. But I was especially happy with your term "hunting cuckold"! It's a nice turn of a phrase. I'm still laughing!

The truth is that a cheater is a selfish person with little self control and poor judgement. People do not change, therefore it was part of their personality when they got married. I have met several admitted cheaters, they were all glib, selfish, and useless people. It did not take me very long to make this determination. Upon further conversation I was able to get them to confess their cheating to me. So, at least in my experience it is not that hard to figure out that these people are not spouse material. Let the buyer beware, do your homework, shit is shit - you can tell by the stink.

E+++I+++E+++I-O.....TK U MLJ LV NV

.....is Sweet! 5 Stars!

The chicken race loser called him a cuckold, but didn't say who was cuckolding him.

Maybe she had one or more previous or other lovers on the side.

Ok lets sum up this story! Sarah fucked Felix the cat, she fucked up her marriage

Felix got pig pissed (that would make one hell of a hangover) Then got fucked over by masked dudes, Sarah got her face Bitch slapped (got the fuck slapped out of her)

Tried to get back with hubby he said fuck off! She then went and fucked n Accountant

He should be able to add 1+1+1=cheating 3 people in a relationship NOT GOOD

HUBBY HAS A NEW FUCK THEY ALL FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCKKKKKIN

HAAAAAPPPYYY? OH OH OH! FELIX GOT DIVORCED!

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

After thought why is the bad guy a lawyer, a dentist, a doctor, a car salesman

Read Estate salesman, wifes Boss , I've never heard of E M T bad Guys

A bit of useless information with no relevance to the story?

use a professional man where you can get free services, TK U MLJ LV NV

Well need to get this straight, Sarah fucked Felix, was caught by hubby, He rains hell on Felix who after getting out of the hospital leaves town, Sarah and the kids beg hubby to be a man up put his pride and ego aside and take her back. Like all stories like this hubby whine’s he’s devastated as he still loves her but still divorces her. If it was true he would go into counselling. Like always in thes type of stories he lands on his feet with a new hotter chick (really unlikely, but the male fantasy.) wife in this story leaves town finds new guy and goes on but usually she ends alone destitute and never dates again (another male fantasy). Give this a maybe a 3 star.

The likelihood is that she's been fucking around for years, which is why she was so good at concealing the evidence but the guy calling him a cuckold in the parking lot got his attention. He realized how strange it was that the guy would have chosen to use that wording and that caused him to start looking for evidence. Even though Sarah knew that he was on edge and acting suspicious because of it, she was too fucking stupid to stop having her cavities filled and lay low for two or three months.

Mrs. Felixsen should have had heavy wool socks filled with about $15 in quarters, tied in a knotted loop around each wrist, when she went after the slut. (works as good as any blackjack)

he does not waste time on BS blabber and endless "contemplation." His stories are straight plot and nothing more. Original and interesting.

Keep on writing.

Still alive you worthless scum of earth? Who give you permission to talk where the real men do? No one caresd about your stupid comments. Your wimpy faggot brain can't process this kind of stories because you are too used to be a worthless piece of shit. Stop breathing, you are waste of air.

I think Anonymous Asshole is a more accurate description. Your disgusting comments revealed your lack of communication skills, hi-lited your poor education and exposed your embarrassingly low IQ. Congratulations, dipshit.

The story wasn't great but it was OK enough for 4 stars.

I agree with others comments that like this author’s stories because there’s not a lot of fluff and padding. Just a straight storyline all the way through. No flashbacks to childhood or college, no family history, just “the story”.Or as Joe Friday would say, “Just the facts, Ma’am”. Yep, please keep them coming, Winterfrog.

I love WF stories. They are stripped down, right to the point, and.usually take no prisoners. Never saw the pig piss revenge before, so that was cool. The beating of Felix was a nice bonus.

Convoluted and childish revenge on the guy, and the slut wife gets off scott free. All your stories are the same.

This was a very nice story until the end. Every story ends like this. The only dofference here is that the wife is not living off the streets. Othetrwise its the same crap. One question i do have, If the husband is such a good lover? And provider. Why then would the wife have to be looking elsdewhere? Answer that ha. ha.

This story was written in 2008. The term cuckold was misused then as well as now (2022). When a wife cheats and the husband is unaware he is not a cuckold.

Who brings their grown-ass children on their first date?

Also, the whole car things made absolutely no sense. There was no payoff.

One of the real problems with WF's stories is that the husband is pretty much always a cold fish.

Why did the wife not suffer in any way, physically or mentally? It was she that wronged him, not the dentist. Beat him up also but first you take care of the cheating slut, not once but for the rest of her life!

I really cant tolerate you stories more than 1/4 of the time

The opening, set in the car park, is very powerful and sets up the story very well. I am immediately hooked - what is going to happen? As it is an LW story, I know that it is not going to turn out well. I think that the violence and revenge was difficult to believe; the beating up could have been omitted. I also wonder why Sarah was so stupid as to continue the affair, at least for a while, after the car park insult was made. Equally, if she hadn't carried on the affair would probably have remained undiscovered and there wouldn't have been a story! Those reservations apart, this a very well-written and sad tale which unfolds logically and believably. I like it that the man in the car park remains unknown, it would have been so easy to weaken the impact by involving him further, that is an effective bit of writing. Mrs Felixsen should have been more suspicious after the attacks on her husband - but her response when she goes into the school is excellent. Thank you for posting this story.

Another story with no painful recrimination for the cheating cunt. What a wimp!