All Comments on 'Chivalry'

This is an engaging story with two likable characters. Very well written to boot. Thanks!

A lovely little story!

Nice story, especially for your first one here. Have you considered a sequel?

Thanks!! I hadn't planned to do a sequel, but I'll definitely think about it. I've got some other ideas in mind in the meantime...

If all writers started out with stories like this, Literotica would be the most highly rated source of erotic stories, in the world. RussetMoose has given us a very well written, thought out, and delicious story, of a chance meeting in the Yosemite woods. His use of sexual imagery, instead of harsh language, and humor, instead of being a slave to the usual sex orgy, is to be commended. I cannot wait to see how he follows up this story; whether it be a sequel, or with an attempt on a new subject. His writing style demands further analysis, and reader loyalty. Prolonged_Debut10

what a lovely story. great 1st story. please a sequel and please no "loving wives" ending.

A well-written and captivating piece. Thank you.