All Comments on 'Chloe'

This story is not complete! Did you just get bored or have no idea how to finish it? You have 3 or 4 threads building tension, and resolved none of them.

Anonymous Andy

It is a great story. Please don't leave it hanging like this.

Bottom of Literotica's page 2, how can Chloe be born in '99 if her Father passed on in '94???

"Chloe Louise Grayson, born August fifth nineteen ninety nine, age seventeen and three quarters. Mother Grace, Father Edward, father died nineteen ninety four, cancer, no other siblings."

Other than this, I Loved The Story, very well written, just wish & hope that you finish it.

What more is there to say?

This story the way it is written is a bit convoluted and at times confusing.

tag of farce just about covers it

This is an enjoyable story .... not the next great novel .... but what story is?