All Comments on 'Chloe in Prison Ch. 02'

I am enjoying the story. It's confusing though with the British colloquialisms. Fanny refers to you ass in America and pussy in England so it can disrupt the flow of the story at times. Might want to consider a more universal term for the sake of clarity to a wider English reading audience. Other than that an excellent story so far.

I think the use of the British slang very integral to the story, and after a bit you get used to it. I would definitely stick with it, and the British spelling, as it makes the story more authentic.

Good story, looking forward to reading the remaining chapters.