by withatwistor2
The main character made the dominance all the more exciting because he doesn't come across as a wimp or too submissive. Thus when he pleasures Chloe, it's because he wants to and not just because she is forcing him.
Cool story!
Super story...one of the best seduction stories.
Chloe is great in seducing a somewhat reluctant man.
He totally succumbs at the end and is at her mercy is
outstanding!
I liked the story, but there is OBVIOISLY no REAL character build up as the best friend never knew about Chloe being a slut! Does Bob know that his wife is a cheating slut ?
But, for me at least, it would have been better without the three other men.
And his dialogue, when agreeing with what she said she'd do, is often stilted. People just don't talk like that.
Gave it 4 stars. Looking forward to subsequent chapters.