All Comments on 'Chocolates for a Scorpion Ch. 03'

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cittrancittranover 9 years ago
What's REALLY funny…

Is that he pierced HER with HIS stinger.

:D

*ba-dum-tssh*

FormerReaderFormerReaderover 9 years ago
Welcome Back

It's been a while since your last story. I really like this series because I can get both my superhero and erotica fix in one setting.I hope you will keep going,and not take as long between chapters. You have quite the "world" going, and if need be introduce new characters and keep rolling.

sithonsithonabout 8 years ago
I liked it.

I was trying to think of analogous heroes from marvel or DC but I couldn't . It was a nice stand alone little universe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome

Dude no other word fits this. Just an amazing story, both dirty and clean. Personally I'd read the shit out of a comic or something in this universe. Please please do more!

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