All Comments on 'Choice Points Pt. 01'

Interviewing story so far. I liked how you set up the characters. What good is a story without getting the reader involved with the characters and plot? You did both very well. Nice writing in every regard. I really want to see where this goes now so you did the job as a writer and story teller. Great job.

I am excited to see where this story goes!!

excited to see where it goes!

A very promising start

I get it now. Soph, I will find you, don't give up hope!

But I have to admit that I got into it after a bit. And I felt myself getting invested in the characters after a while. Perhaps I'll read the rest of the parts....

I rad the rest of this stories, it was incredible.