All Comments on 'Choices & Decisions Ch. 01'

I've read other stories you've written but this one just seemed like a disjointed mess. 1*

This story is like a good Louisiana recipe - lots of rich ingredients that take time to develop. But when they do ...

I like the way you build up to your climaxes with layer upon layer of detailed events.

I wonder where you'll go from here?

every thing is included on a daily basis and don't forget good or bad. TK U MLJ LV NV

Always a good time.

My only suggestion would be to not throw so many characters at your readers all at once. The initial paragraphs of this story are a bit overwhelming because of that.

Thanks for sharing a great read.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!