All Comments on 'Choices and Sacrifices Ch. 03'

Five.

Great update. I am glad Keegan broke up with the girl. But I am sure drama is coming. Love the sex scene and glad they took that step. Please update soon.

Keegan is a coward. He might've broken up with Bethany but he did it in such an ugly way. He knows how sensitive Bethany is, he should've done it face to face and not with a 5 second conversation. Bethany is going to show up in town to find out what's going on.

Sabrina need to talk to her dad so she can have closure. She doesn't have to talk to him again after that. All that anger is not healthy for her.

I was also disappointed in how he ended things but he's young. Good update.

Great update and I loved the Scandal reference thrown in there my favorite show

WRITE MORE DON'T STOP WRITING THE TIME IS KILLING ME!

Nice chapter by the way. But I'm confused with the timing of it all, didn't chapter 1 say this was taking place in 2002 and how is it they're quoting the TV show Scandal? Was that a typo and you meant 2012? Also you use words like her lips were hydrated instead of moist, just little things like that threw me off, but other than that very nice chapter. Not sure why Keenan didn't fess up and just tell Bethany he met someone else or tell Sabrina about his ex... seems like he knows he's inviting drama. Can't wait for the next chapter.

-Christina

Great way to get over his ex I guess