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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Well written and engaging story. Seemed like a strange place to end it, though. A paragraph earlier would have made more sense to me.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy6 months ago

Sad beginning!

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bruce22bruce22over 16 years ago
Sad but Strong Start

Hope that you can keep up the fine writing

and plotting through many chapters.

Thanks for writing

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 16 years ago
A well done start of a story, going ????

It is well written and of course has the whole world of possibilities open. I look forward to more of the story and the background of the characters as they develop.<P>Thank you for the entertainment<P>PT

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very good start

Please keep it coming. Maybe make each chapter a little longer,please? Thanks for entertaining us.

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